Very good, even though you could have done better. Congrats!
Love, love and absolutely love. OMG! This is one hell of a book. I just can't believe you ended it. I want it to go on forever, and ever, and ever... Anyways, great job on this book, and you should definitely write more!!!! One of my favourite books on this website. Sadler and Ailith are just sooooo cute together.
I have read this book 4 times in the last few weeks. It is exceptional and rates as one of my favorite books ever, including the many print books that I own. After a bit of editing to correct some minor mistakes (except instead of accept, hall instead of haul) and possibly rethinking the title (just cause it doesn't convey Ailith's strength), I would gladly purchase this in hardcopy print.
Please keep up the excellent work.